Saturday, February 21, 2015

Skull Excerpt #2

I got such positive feedback on the last excerpt I posted that I decided another sample of my story wouldn't be such a bad thing. For this one, though, I wanted to take a different angle, and return to the origins of the characters that appeared in the last one. 
In this particular scene, Cody Armstrong is introduced to his newly assigned squadron: Delta Squad. I thought this would be a good scene to post, since the introduction takes place in Hangar 11 - which is what I named my blog after. 
Again, any feedback on your part is extremely appreciated. 

It was extremely cold in the hangar, and Cody shivered upon entering. The only sunlight fluttering in was coming from small windows near the roof – mere slivers compared to everything else in here.
            There were several more fighter jets and land vehicles within the dimly lit bay, most of its area dedicated to weapon storage. At least, Cody assumed it was weapons – for he saw nothing but stacks upon stacks of crates.
             Off in one corner, there was a half pyramid of crates against a wall. Three men stood near the military-grade boxes, talking casually. All three of them wore full ultra soldier armor, though only one had his helmet on.
            One of the men was twirling a twelve-inch combat knife in his hand. He wielded the weapon as if it were a harmless utensil. The sleek metal of the blade gleamed whenever one particular spot met the sunlight.
            The second man had his back turned to Cody, though he could tell the soldier was in the process of cleaning a long-barreled rifle, perhaps a sniper. He had long black hair that fell in messy clumps about his shoulders.
            The third soldier – the one with the helmet - leaned against the stack of crates, his arms folded. Cody was unable to make out his mood nor his features from the bleak visor he wore.
            Harvey’s presence stirred the group.
            “Ah, Harvey,” the man cleaning his sniper began, turning in his seat. “Was wondering when you’d show up.”
            The soldier spoke in a heavy accent Cody could only discern as Russian. He had pale eyes and a strong demeanor. Cody assumed that the care he had for his sniper proved that he was a marksman, same as Hayden.
            “Saved one for you, boss,” the soldier with the knife spoke up, tossing a small object to Harvey. He caught it easily, sticking it in his mouth appreciatively. It was a cigar. Cuban, from the length and smell.
            Cody had tried smoking in the past.
            Never again.
            Harvey lit the cigar and took a quick puff of its seemingly splendid smoke. The others didn’t really pay much attention to it, for - unbeknownst to Cody - Harvey was a heavy smoker. Had been all his life. Delta had gotten used to it over the years.
            Harvey removed the cigar from his mouth and gestured to the three soldiers.
            “This is Delta squad,” he stated, pointing to Cody. “And this is Cody. Our new recruit.”
            “And green as grass, by the looks of it,” the marksman said skeptically, coming towards Cody. “Looks more like glorified cannon fodder, if you ask me.”
            Cody stood up straighter, hoping that it would display a sense of power within him. The marksman wasn’t moved. He eyed Cody like he a bear gloating over fresh meat.
            A half smile crept over his face. He leaned in towards Cody, as if to intimidate the recruit. Unfortunately, it seemed to be working.
            “Oh, leave him alone, Cealen,” the knife-wielding soldier scolded his comrade. He shoved the marksman out of the way, allowing him to continue the introductions. Unlike Cealen, he smiled and stuck out his hand. “Name’s Zack. SSC Zachary Smith, if you want to be formal. But, as you probably know, we’re not that polite.”
            Zack, unlike Cealen, was quick with his words. He spoke in short bursts, as if taking a long time speaking was a sin.
            “I’ll let you figure out what the SSC stands for,” Zack continued, fast as a bullet.
            Cody knew that it stood for Sergeant Second Class. No doubt Zack was Harvey’s second-in-command.
            “Zack’s our nerd in the squad,” Cealen explained from behind. He had returned to cleaning his rifle.
            “Am not!” Zack retorted, spinning to face his companion. “At least one of us knows how to hack enemy hardware.”
            Cealen gestured to his gun. “I wouldn’t need to.”
            “Contrary to your belief, Cealen, you can’t just shoot everything in sight,” Zack replied.
            “Says who?” Cealen scoffed. “They pay me to shoot, not do math.”
            “Yeah,” Zack continued. “And unlike the rest of us, you weren’t born, you were government-issued.”
            “To snipe,” Cealen agreed.  
            Cody looked askance at Harvey. He smiled as he sucked back on his cigar. Apparently this kind of argument, however playful, was a common sight among Delta. Other sergeants would jump all over their subordinates for behavior like this.
            Perhaps it gave Delta a chance to ease tension.
            Zack shook his head. “You’re hopeless,” he turned back to Cody. “Anyway, he’s right. I’m the only one with real smarts in this squad. But,” he held up a finger, “that doesn’t mean I don’t know how to handle a gun.”
            “Oh, you know how to handle a gun, Zack. Most definitely,” Cealen agreed, his voice dripping with sarcasm. “You just don’t know how to make one dance.”
            “And that’s Cealen,” Zack introduced his comrade. “Our gifted marksman.”
            “That’s PFC Cealen Parker to you, greenie,” Cealen corrected, slapping a large ammunition clip into his sniper. Finished with repairs, he set the gun to the side. “And I’m the best damn sniper the galaxy has to offer. Don’t let anyone tell you different.”
            Hayden could give you a run for your money, Cody thought. Something told him saying that out loud was the worst decision he could make.
            “You guys certainly don’t lack for confidence,” he said aloud.
            “We like to keep our self esteem up. Let’s us be ecstatic under gunfire,” Zack joked, shrugging. Cody smiled as he pictured Delta on a boisterous battlefield, their faces bright with quirky smirks. That could explain why they were the best of the best.  
            Cody glanced past Cealen and Zack to the mysterious soldier leaning against the crates. He still hadn’t moved from his initial position, and Cody realized that his head was tilted in his direction.
            Zack followed Cody’s gaze.
            “Ah, and that is our final member: Corporal Ethan Hunter,” he explained. “But, you can call him by the name every other squad has for him: The Walking Tank.”
            Ethan pushed off the crate and strode over to Cody. At first, Cody didn’t see any reason to call him by that name, until the soldier was standing in front of him – or, rather, above him.
            The giant of a man must’ve been at least eight feet tall. Cody had to crane his neck to look into the bleak visor he wore. His huge set of armor clanked together with each step that he took. Combined, it had to have weighed a thousand pounds; Ethan wore the outfit like it was nothing.
            Silently, Cody gulped.
            This man could eat someone his size for breakfast. And that wasn’t hyperbole.
            “I think he likes you,” Cealen muttered deviously, like he was the owner of a huge, vicious bulldog that had started licking a guest.
            Ethan proffered one of his meaty hands to Cody. It was at least twice the size of any regular hand, and it was covered by a thick, bendable skin of armor.
            Hesitantly, Cody took the hand in his and squeezed.
            Accepting the challenge, Ethan squeezed back. Cody felt his knuckles grind together, felt the blood rush away from his fingertips. Ethan held on for about thirty seconds, then let go.
            Cody sighed in relief, shook his hand up and down to regain the retracted blood. If a simple squeeze could do that much damage, there was no telling the amount of havoc this beast of a man could perform.
            Ethan stepped back, folding his arms. Although the visor hid his face, Cody knew the Walking Tank was smirking. That handshake had probably forced Cody to make a hysterical face.
            “Don’t let his looks deceive you,” Zack said, patting Ethan on the back. He had to reach upwards to do so. “He’s quite the gentle giant, if you catch my meaning.”
            “Well, it’s nice to meet you, Ethan,” Cody flexed his hand several times, satisfied with the repair work he had performed.
            For a moment, the group sat in silence, waiting for Ethan to say something back. But, he remained silent. It rattled Cody.
            “Do you speak?” Cody asked, cocking an eyebrow.
            “He doesn’t,” Zack explained, matter-of-factly.
            Cody said, “Why not?”
            “He doesn’t say,” Cealen replied.
            Ethan nodded slowly in agreement. Cody was amazed at the level of familiarity within this squad. They treated one another in an odd way, as if they were all of the same consciousness. A setting like this in the military was extremely atypical. Cody couldn’t exactly place his finger on the feeling.
            Casual. That was it. If he didn’t know any better, he’d say he just walked into a fraternity. He wondered how the leaders of the military treated this squad – they probably didn’t approve of this kind of behavior.
            Then again, of all the ultra soldiers he’d met, Delta appeared the most efficient. They had earned a sinister reputation, after all.

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